My mother often tells me that I talk too
much. I say things in a round-about way
that takes longer than necessary. I am sure this is true, although I have never
had to listen to myself speak.
This bad habit shows up in my writing as
well. I realized this in high school, so
I developed a way to work around it. I
didn’t want to have to stop the flow of my thoughts as I was writing in order
to use words more economically. Instead,
I wrote whatever I wanted, however I wanted.
When I was done, I’d cut out anywhere from 25-30% of my writing. By putting my ramblings on the chopping block,
I ended up with a better product than I would have had otherwise. Of course, this is just one aspect of the
editorial process. I still have much to
learn about writing prose that says what I need to say without rambling, but I
hope I am getting better.
I think Twitter will take me to a new
level of using words economically. When
I have to express my thought in 140 characters or less, I have to choose my
words more carefully. Hopefully, over
time, I’ll get better at writing well-crafted, more powerful sentences the
first time around.
I’ll know I’m getting closer to that goal
when I take my work to the chopping block...and only leave 10-15% behind. I’ll really know I’ve arrived if Mom no
longer has to remind me that I am talking too much.
(18%
was left on the chopping block for this post. I still have a way to go.)
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